Friday, October 19, 2007

Soft as cool dust

The rainy season.
First drops fall soft as cool dust,
sting like memory

4 comments:

Anna said...

I like this. This is so real to me. I felt it in my heart.

coyote said...

Thank you, Anna V, and welcome to Moon. Feel free to explore the archives...

pissed off patricia said...

Lovely and a bit haunting too.

_Soulless_ said...

"soft as cool dust"

With that metaphor, you've given the reader a new way of experiencing rain. ^_^ I love drizzles myself (the umbrella stays hidden).

Great wordplay.